";s:4:"text";s:26391:"Solfeggio 852 Hz, There is a big window at the back of the room. You had very descriptive vocabulary and there was a lot of adjectives and that made it very interesting. But besides from that it is an awesome room and I love it. The cleanliness of my bedroom is pretty good, but sometimes my football gear is left outside my wardrobe on the floor. On the other side of the room is my chair with my blanket that fades from blue to white. Sorry your room is so small! There is also a small book case under the window it is red, green and blue Ive had it since I was little. The walls and ceiling have little lumps and bumps and patterns to make my room have a bit more affect. The final piece of furniture is a tall drawer set, which contains five drawers worth of clothing. My room is upstairs so as soon as you walk up the stairs you are in my room. I work my way through the chaos and reach my bed. The carpet packs a warm feel to the room as it completes it and gives it a nice finish. Next time try used some words less for example the word 'and'. My bedroom is special to me because it's where I can go to get alone time and just relax it's pretty smelly but it's a cozy warm layout that is just for me. I have my normal bag that I take to school everyday, my blue PE bag, my purple ski/sport bag and my old orange school bag. My accessories, make my room the way it is. No need to be fancy, just an overview. Thirdly, the colour scheme. Emma I like how consistent you are on your punctuation's It is good how you used them. Personally I love all the things in my bedroom but just not the way they are set out. Now lets talk about the mess. The movie is about a family trying to save their home (their castle) from developers who are trying to forcibly take it off them. Its a 2-door car with gray rim color and custom white tires. The relaxation of leaping onto it at the end of the day is basically the same as reading a extremely tired baby a lullaby. Overall well done. But it could be neater and all the belongings could be organised. I love the colour scheme in my bedroom as turquoise blue is one of favourite colours. These windows also include a door, that leads out into one of three gardens at my house. What storms then shook the ocean of my sleep. My next topic is my rooms cleanliness. So I would say that the overall style or theme of my bedroom is a rustic and tough style. My carpet is dark brown and I have no rugs or anything other than my carpet on the floor. I think my bedroom is perfect my way because of the colors, layout and the design. The style of your room to me is a dark and bright theme with all the colours and design. It is filled with different kinds of art, photos and bedding. I love my room and I always will but it does have some bad thing about It but I still love it. My bedroom is small but everything fits in it. In the corner by my door is my double bed, in the other is my desk and stool. My bedroom is in the middle of two other bedrooms. My turquoise blanket has a delicate touch, so fluffy you want to take it everywhere. All my shiny medals from past sporting events and competitions hang next to my wardrobe. Well, kind of - there isnt a set theme but there is a lot of stuff from the beach. Firstly, the furniture. This crossword clue Metaphor for My duvet has white and pink checkers on it, ontop of that I have a small blue blanket with symmetrical squares on it. You really made me think of what your room would've looked like with your little brothers toy box and with the bog window and the red wall. Then there's the senses - smell, sight, sound, touch. My bed is quite low to the ground. My bedroom is very tidy. Next time just maybe double check spelling. The darker colors in my room are mainly my wardrobe doors and my duvet, my duvet is black, grey and a dark orange. It is a king single and it has a wooden front and back board. Remington 7600 Thumbhole Stock, If you were to say that your office was your home, you would be saying that youre always at the office! My miniature dog and cow sculptures sitting on my desk beginning to gather dust. Does my room have a theme? On my bed is a light purple duvet with a big blanket folded on the end. 3 of my walls are a plain white but the fourth one has wallpaper on it, the wall paper has a cream coloured background and has light pink coloured pineapples. But sometimes it doesn't stay clean. I enjoy spending my own time just lying on my bed listening to music. I really liked that you had some really awesome words in your writing that really hooked me in and made it more intresting to keep on reading along. They are stacked up quite messily. In the middle of my room up against the feature wall is my bed, its a Queen Double, with white outlines of hexagons and a grey background for my duvet and pillows. A metaphor for a bedroom could be, " His bedroom is like a sauna since the air conditioner broke." At Christmas time, a lot of families go to all sorts of lengths to have their house lit up from the outside. You have got great vocabulary, I didn't really see anything that wrong. They are rather a good set and they cost a lot of money. Style of the room is mine and only mine if anyone can match my unique style they all mash up together to make the bedroom mine. The delicate carpet instantly warms up my feet. When you look in my room you will see that it is kind of a square shape with green and graffiti wallpaper. On the floor there is all my stuff for my I-Pod and I-Phone like my charger and headphones which are plain white and usually tangled up. You also need to double check that your sentences making sense. Great descriptions and fun to read. There is a massive window in front of you as you walk into my bedroom. Soft grey carpet pushing through my feet. How my bedroom looks? Jessie, I liked the length of the paragraphs and the descriptive words that you put in. Here, theyre using comparison (that a vault is hard to get into, just like the home), but instead of saying like a vault, theyre saying is a vault, for literary effect. Sometimes the temperature goes up and sometimes goes right down. My favorite thing in my bedroom is my drums they are blue and black but look purple in the light. Were most comfortable there, which is why we have the idiom: I feel right at home. My room smells inviting, it's like strawberries mixed with flowers (which smells good). My mum sees I have to clean my room each day. On the left side wall there is a wooden desk and stool and also a white shelve covered in shells and camera gear. MY BEDROOM! My bed is really messy, it would be rare to see it made. I really enjoyed this story. You had great vocabulary and good use of nouns and adjectives. I think that it is still also good to keep using basic words. Then the colour of the furniture from a blue to a lighter colour. On the door it has my name (Will) and other things I made in hard materials. You may find me laying there reading a book in the natural light coming through my window, which is my main source of light. Around the corner from my desk there is a window bay couch that is navy blue, across from the couch there is my Aqua chair covered in rugs and pillows. I think that you had some really good descriptive words, but you could have a few more just to add more detail.3+. At the foot of my bed there is a built in wardrobe with lots of clothes and at the foot of my sisters bed theres the entrance to the room and the door to the en suite. I'd like to see your room Alex because of the rustic theme and colours. Interesting imagination Teatukura. A metaphor is a trope or figure of speech in which an implied comparison is made between two I peer out the window and see the light reflecting itself on the lake and the wind creating ripples in the water. I am proud of this layout, despite the occasional spots of untidiness. A stout red beanbag accommodates a spot near the middle of the room. 4. I love my room just the way it is, I even love the modern color's. My room is not too empty but its not too full either. For next time you could use more vocabulary and try not to repeat words. The editing for your description is great, haven't found any mistakes. There are lots of accessories in the room. My room also has a bit of a natural vibe as there are a far few plants around room. On it there are two pictures both a light green in background with pink and yellow tulips. The duvet is black and white patterned with vibrant orange sheets. All over the wall on one side are posters of things I like such as rugby posters and some flags. the room was smelly like dirty socks. Also my room is full of stuff to have fun with but my favorite thing to do is make cool trickshot area so I can record them and post them on to my YouTube channel. My PS4 is tall and black with a blue light going across it and it has a futuristic look to it. I don't like the layout because my bed is on the other side of the room. The color of the carpet is a dark grey which goes with the furniture and the color of the walls. Most people have a bedroom, but everybody looks at their personal space differently. My bedroom is a medium size which I think fits everything in nicely. You describe it very well, you could visualize yourself in your room. My bedroom is somewhere that I regularly spend time. In my room I have my school bags. My king single bed is jammed in the right hand corner with my beside table just beside it and underneath my window. So let's explore the den people called my room. The bedroom is a place of solitude, a place to just relax, I spend most of my time either sleeping or reading and the rest of the time is for cleaning, it's not the fanciest but it's mine. The style of my room is perfect. The only thing thats in there is a couple of dresses I never wear and some picture frames that my mum forgot to take out when she moved rooms. The colours in your room must be very bright with the sun on it and I can visualise your room. My bedroom. what is commonly misdiagnosed as pink eye. The layout of my room is made so everything can fit. Also another way to brighten the room would be to open the curtains. The size is a king single. I have some great accessories in my room that can give you a story about my personality. Their should be a comma after hallway in the first sentence, and I am also confused on why in your last paragraph you started off with firstly. So I think that my bedroom is good because it is big and warm and I like how it is big enough to fit like 6 or more double beds in it so I can have a lot of friends round. Your paragraphs could of been a bit bigger, I like your ideas and you described it really wall. The best bit about our carpet is it is always warm from under floor heating. you also need to indent your paragraphs. well done kaden it does sound like your room. 3, You did spell some difficult words. Ano ang mga kasabihan sa sa aking kababata? I think that the things in my room represent me and my interests. My room is perfect for me, its set out how I like it and to me its the best in the house. To say your home is a safety blanket is to relate it to the characteristics of safety blankets: they make you feel comforted, safe, and protected from the world. I think your punctuation is good but some of your sentences are quiet long, you should of made them into 2 sentences instead of 1. Your spelling was mostly correct there were just a few words like duvet. Big books and small books. Things that you need to work on is the punctuation and the length of your sentences. Then a little bit more right you will see a king size bed with a star wars duvay cover and black pillows. By Angus Stewart, I like how you have clearly stated your paragraphs. I'm not saying my bedroom is small it's just not big enough for all my bits and bobs. When you look around my room you can see a whole bunch of different things, if you climb above all the dirty clothes, theres all of my furniture, my radiator and a whole load of colours. On the very top of my tall draws of my dressers are a couple of drink bottles, along with a cup I got from netball this season. He is a pig. The house is an old homestead and the wood has a great chestnut kind of color. My room to me is the most warmest place in house which makes my room cozy and casual. LOGANS BEDROOM 2 long pillows sit on top of my bed behind a small, dark square pillow. The brown carpet matches the old wooden skirting. As you walk into my room there are many things you may notice first. Stinky socks, crumpled papers and forgotten towels. Yes it definately is the best bedroom in the house and yes we are all jealous!!!! But that's not the only thing built in to the wall there is also a reading light that can be spun and moved around into different places, but not all my accessories are new such as the hulk that has been stuck to the window by a suction cup, that's a horrendous 6 years old! Hopefully we will get you some colour in your room soon. My clothes they are scattered all around my room you can hardly see the flour and most of them aren't washed. It has creamy vanilla wallpaper with 2 rose red chandeliers that hang of the corners of my room. Your mother or father might have taught you a lot of dishes to cook or given you a lot of games to play to help your brain. This was well edited, but to get even better look over and over. Next to them I have tall, white draws bulging with clothes. Im proud to call the bedroom mine but im going to change it sometime in the future. Looking a bit further up you can see a sky light, the plastic that covers it from the reflective tube in the attic isnt fastened properly so if somebody slams a door somewhere it vibrates and makes such a commotion. I am sure that I will add tons more in the future. Like I mentioned before, my windows take up quite a lot of space, meaning that I don't have very much room for any other decorations. Chris Trousdale Cause Of Death, As I wade through the swamp of clutter I find things I lost from months ago. Your descriptive writing has a 'quirky' sense of humour in it showing good 'personal voice'. Finally, you look a little bit to the right and see a closet, that's where I would love to have a little seating area with a seat and a lamp so could my little private area. Overall I like my bedroom and not to much needs changing. I have a cupboard kind of in the shape of some steps so that I can get up to my tall bed, I'm replacing this storage unit for some climbing holds. I like the vocabulary you used to describe your story like vibrant, large, silk, chilled. No one's room is black and white they all have colours and mine has definitely got a lot of colours. What is the time signature of the song Atin Cu Pung Singsing? I enjoyed reading your writing illustrates without hesitation what your room feels and looks like. I also have a variety of colourful possessions around the room. Its an old 50 inch Panasonic TV with a gray color scheme and a black outline and controls on the front. For self fun and study. Three things that are very special to me is my necklaces and a bracelet. Well in my bedroom I have blue and white walls. The next thing you eyes will find is my small black bedside table. A metaphor is a literary device in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action in a way that is not possible in a literal sense. Just below bed there are the studying tables for homework and other work. There are so many little pieces to remember that I dont even know nearly half of them even exist. Due to the architectural design of my house, my rooms windows receive little to no sun, excluding the few hours of late afternoon to sundown. There is a big space in the middle of the room because of the positioning of the furniture. On the other side of my bed, sits the divider that holds all of my well-loved books and DVDs. Because if you dont and try wade through all the clothes spread out and risk breaking your leg or ankle on toy cars or getting bits of lego stuck between your toes. The accessories. It's good that he loves his room and his own space. Who is the longest reigning WWE Champion of all time? Separating my sister and I is a large divider, that holds all of my adored books and other well-used items. I think Hannah's story had lots of descriptive words and had good punctuation and spelling. She was fairly certain that life was a fashion show. The door is white with a mirror on it. Another piece of furniture I haven't yet mentioned is my bookshelf. My room is the perfect size for all my things and for me and thats how I like it. - Contact Us - Privacy Policy - Terms and Conditions, Definition and Examples of Literary Terms, Famous Metaphors from Athletes, Artists, and Authors, Top 6 Great Metaphors in Presidential Speeches, 10 Great Metaphors from Popular 2000s Songs, 10 Dramatic Uses of Apostrophe by Edgar Allan Poe, Love is a fragile flower opening to the warmth of spring, Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. , All the worlds a stage, and all the men and women merely players. , All our words are but crumbs that fall down from the feast of the mind. , Let us be grateful to people who make us happy, they are the charming gardeners who make our souls blossom. , Advertising is the rattling of a stick inside a swill bucket. , Dying is a wild night and a new road. , Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. . The bed is the main part of any bedroom because that's where everyone spends the most time. Yeah I know I left it messy on monday but I promise you I cleaned it up as soon as I got home [wink wink]. In my personal opinion I do love the way my bedroom looks and how it has a theme and a great view! TROYS BEDROOM The cleanliness of my room is not so good. You have described it so accurately. A wooden bedside table [that I mention before.] Now you should have a pretty good idea of what my bedroom looks like. The cast on My bedroom My room has a modern style to it because of the things I have in it. At first, I thought you were describing the ocean! But I like it because I can change the room around to the way I like it. Similarly, if you are homeschooled or do schooling over the internet, then your home might both metaphorically and literally be a classroom! Its mine and I like it the way it is. You might walk in and say, Why is my home a Christmas tree? MY BEDROOM Your description was enjoyable to read. There are loads of different earrings dangling off of a metal sheet, which is shaped into a dog. I have a modern wooden desk for school work. Don't fix up anything that's awesome. I have a ps3 sitting in my room waiting for me to get my t.v put in which will be a samsung t.v. You have missed out on some things ie. Also there is a lot of sporting equipment scattered around the room. The touch, it's soft, smooth and warm at night. My bedroom is just the way I like it. The pencils are mostly sharp, pointy ready to be used. My room does not have a lot of furniture in it but the favorite part of my room does and that is my desk it has two skinny shelves next to it. It may be the second smallest room in the house but Im proud to call it mine.This style of bedroom works well for me and fits me perfectly. My bedroom looks, smells and feels great. My parents make me keep it tidy for good habits. you could add more expression in your writing next time. This was very well edited so there is not to much to say you have done a very good job with very little mistakes. Decorations fill the room with topics, happiness, colours and hobbies. I really love my bedroom, its completely designed by me and thats why I love it. I am confused about what self fun is though. I love my room because it's mine. Which one of them is a basketball poster and on that wall, I have a light to look over my cabinet in the corner of my room to brighten it up. My Home is my Castle. There are special items in my bedroom that cost a lot of money and one of those accessories are my Hats . let me know your thoughts? One child might be working on a project on the floor, another one jumping on the couch, and another crying in the bedroom. The walls have a paint swirl on it that comes off the wall about 5 cm and it looks awesome! Not always that bad because your mother gets sick of it and cleans it up a bit!!!!!!!!! I like how you made them all simple but have a bit of depth. Great descriptive peace of writing and it really felt like I was in your room. There is no one there in your house who can tell you what to do (unless youre a kid then your parents are the king and queen of the castle!). There is a famous song with the line Home is wherever Im with you. The darkness at specific times, so as I said it can get dark fast, I have to use my lighting module just to make it look like its still daylight, it gets annoying sometimes, you just got home and you go in your room and you cant find the light (By the way my hallway light is a sensor light). I think some of your sentences were a bit long and could have benefited from some more commas, but I think your punctuation has improved. Now for all of the accessories in my room. My bed is the main accessory in my room because it is in the center of the room up against my feature wall. Now I have my wardrobe at the foot of my bed because it makes it very easy to access when I wake up every excruciating morning. November 2016 Well Done Jakey Muss x. KADENS BEDROOM The reason for this is that we only moved last month so things still need to be put up. Love reading your stories as always! Thanks to those paintings my room has some colour. But i have to admit I have a wonderful cleaner to clean my room but the way I left it was the day before the cleaner comes round. Can't see any spelling errors good job . Above my bed are two medium sized paintings, one of an owl and the other of a tree. sleeps in my room. The punctuation is almost flawless, as far as I can see. James, I liked the way you structured your paragraphs and the whole description came together. Describe The Room Your In Describe the room you are in Dark, empty and cool; I gaze ahead at the room before me, with only the sound of the air conditioner thrumming. My duchess is across from my bed flat against the left hand wall. There is also a tall boy and an inbuilt wardrobe where I keep all of my shirts for school. Finally is my headset it is a turtlebeach recon 60P with a black base and a cool funky design on the base. Troy you have used some good vocab. It is made of pine so is a rather light golden brown in colour. But thankfully, I dont have to suffer these flaws much longer, because in the holidays, Ill be moving rooms and Ill have the smallest but sunniest room in the house. It was an excellent piece of writing. It is one of the few places I feel confident to be me and feel as though no-one else can touch me. Usually when I have to make space/ tidy my room I put stuff in the wrong place. Really liked it Chris! Then there's my desk covered in books, pens and rubbish along with my PJs and sports gear spread everywhere . Christina Moses Weight Loss, My bed is painted a purple-indigo colour. It is mostly a cool breeze that feels like the ocean air. This table was my sisters and it has mascara stains on it. Most of my accessories are very modern as same are made out of glass or clay. Let me tell you about my favourite place to be AKA my bed. Then straight ahead you will see my drawers with three pukeko statues and some other items. It lies to the left of the monitor on the desk and is covered with old homework and empty cups. One of my relaxed comfortable places. I like the part when you recognise that your room needs cleaning and organise your things to feel much comfortable but most of all you are comfortable in your room. Even my parents say it is ugly. The jewelry box once belonged my wonderful Mother. I don't care what people think about it because its my own space. In your writing I have noticed that you need to improve the proper use of functuation. Then the bedside table is nearly crammed in the top left hand corner. Muesli bar wrappers, food wrappers and clothes tags are a common item found on my floor. There are also some capital letters that are in the wrong place. The best part of my room is the furniture and layout. Well described - good use of descriptive words. Reading and studying books across the studying bench and on the side table. Like it get messy easily, not a lot of room to have fun and other thing. I dont ever think of changing my carpet but if I was then I would just throw heaps of pillows down onto my floor, that would be very comfy. But the worst thing about having a messy room is the feeling that you have of dreading about actually cleaning it. Great writing. You need to work on editing on your opening sentence. The carpet in my room is the newest and cleanest. All Rights Reserved. You might go to a spa retreat or meditation retreat to escape from the world and get some relaxation. People drive around the neighborhoods to see the beautiful houses lit up. I like the constant use of adjectives, it helps me visualise the colours. Now I will tell you about the sight, first I will tell you about the pictures and posters, on top of my duchess there is a is a drawing about what the future would look like, I drew in year 5 my mum thought it was a nice drawing so she framed it. My room has an area where I keep drawing and pictures, an area for me to keep my collections. The coziest of It, I'll admit my room is the coziest in the house.and that's how I like, warm covers,warm mattress and my relaxing spot. Hannahs Bedroom To call your home a dump is to say that its a complete mess! cock is like. The third most used color is brown as most of my cabinets is that color so I have many bland colors not colorful colors. What a great description of your beautiful bedroom! Inspirational messages can be viewed on plaques, saying things such as dream, see beauty in everything, or friends are the family we choose for ourselves. The word believe is arched across the door to my wardrobe. The rooms style of the room is old rugged modern and not really cared about but that's what makes it mine. Everyone wants to have the perfect bedroom, the best way to do that is to make it your own. ";s:7:"keyword";s:31:"metaphors to describe a bedroom";s:5:"links";s:461:"Chipley High School Homecoming 2021,
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